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Laughing leaps

Blissful waves flushed with joy
sparkling with cheerful shimmy indentations.

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Great choice of ten words. best of luck in the contest.


  • Kari gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    Wonderful job! Thanks for your entry in my contest!


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 13, 2008

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    ahh i see it now, this is really beautiful,
    i love those two lines i do,
    all my love, keep penning,
    kitty xxx


  • crimsondew
    July 13, 2008

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    cheerful shimmy indentations.

    That is just so cute and delightful...Beautiful imagery dear..
    All the best in the contest!