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Balloons of laughter







Angels sing in heavens
a sister
blows another candle tomorrow.



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  • abuyi
    July 14, 2008
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    very creative my dear friend.. i loved it
    congrats for the bronze


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 14, 2008

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    I like your juxtaposition, singing angels and the birthday girl. Ooh, another fun background.
    Congratulations on the bronze.
    Marlene


  • Kari gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    Aw, this is so very sweet and precious.
    Thank you for your entry in my contest.


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 13, 2008

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    oooh, this is so divine! totally made me smile, thanks for sharing, and all the best in the contest,

    Luck.

  • Judith Chandler
    July 13, 2008
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    It sounds quite festive, nice ten word expression of joy.

    Good luck.


  • BehindTheShadow
    July 13, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt! Best of luck to you!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    Aww... she is an angel too

    Cute!


  • Aliya Abbas
    July 13, 2008
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    good luck in the contest


  • Aliya Abbas
    July 13, 2008
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    very good write.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 13, 2008
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    wow a beautiful dedicated poem good luck in the contest

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