Everyone dies.
Some sooner than others.
Some unexpectedly, some purposely.
Some in due time and others before their time even starts.
Some die peacefully, some die tragically, some die wastefully.
And then there are those who die unnoticed.
A contest entry
- Finish Strong by TabbyJoy.
700 points, ended November 20, 2008, 58 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yes, its how its done for sure, thanks for your entry
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Wow!
You think you know where it's going... then wham!
We ALL hope we are not one of the unnoticed.
Great.
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Oh...the last line is a powerful one. This is what I'm looking for in this contest. Goes great with the picture.
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chill went through me in the last line. great job, i love it. god luck
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As emotionally strong and honest as this is just the way it is, i also wonder what could have happened if you had developed it further.
But with that said, i did feel this. I don't know about anyone else, but i don't want to be one of those who dies unnoticed. I very much like the visual impact.. the combination of the picture with the shape of the poem + the black/white contrasting... it all creates a very strong image.
Another great piece, well done
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So sad and so true. The last line brought such an emotional impact, because thinking about it there are people who die unoticed and its really sad because you think..doesnt anyone care? I really enjoyed this
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