Explode!
A celestial journey
glittering lights
Free your heart
Explode!
A contest entry
- Lets get ready to rummbleeeeeeee! In 10 Words! by Kari.
395 points, ended July 14, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feel free to be as critical (or not) as you like...
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Sounds like fireworks!
A short masterful work! I always fine the short pieces the hardest, good work!
Regards,
Degraw
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Very nice
You have said alot with just a few words.Good luck with your contest.
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I think I would love to go on that type of journey
I can see the glittering lights happening in just a few hours....lol.
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This is so powerful in such a short moment. i love the repeat of explode as a form of freedom. WTG!!!!!
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Very Nice!
I do adore the short forms! Such powerful images wrapped in such a succinct form, you've done well with this one! In the fourth line did you mean: "Free your heart"? Keep your pen to the page and good luck in the contest! -
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You're absolutely right! thanks for pointing out that typo....
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Nice!
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wow a wonderful take on the promt
A celestial journey glittering lights Free you heart
good luck in the contest
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So high spirited ..
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