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Binded Love

My lips were bound by my heart.
It would not speak the truth.

My emotions have been confined
never to rupture,
only emplode.

My smile, only a disguise
when you spoke to me
I died a little inside.

I breathe in,
remembering every inch of your skin,
every time you made me laugh,
until we cried.
every kiss
every soft embrace
I breathe in the essence of you.

tonight,
I listen to your confession.
You tell me you still love me.


In an instant
you have unleashed all within me,
in a burst of sensation
I am exposed.

My heart has released my lips
and I speak the truth.

emotions reveal themselves
in sheer verocity.

pure are my words
I confess
I love you too.

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  • OldBear34 silver member
    October 7, 2008
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    A Sweet Expression of Reclaimed Love

    Expressive tale of love rekindled. I liked it.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    Humm..what a magic is flowing in your hertwarming words bringing the music of the mysterious sentiments called love..I love the notes and tone of the words..indeed a beautiful piece you are herewith ..well done my friend..


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    August 4, 2008

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    Awww this is precious!
    Your heart speaks loud and clear to the desire of your heart
    Very much enjoyed reading! Pen on!


  • Kittehs-Tears
    July 29, 2008
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    i rly like it =]


  • sjgaither
    July 16, 2008
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    Pure

    Pure is the essence of the words you have captured here.


  • CrazyC87
    July 13, 2008

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    Your the Love of My Life!

    Gosh... Words couldnt even explain how i feel right now.. i feel what ur sayin when you said your lips were bound by ur heart.. it just never felt right after u.. and now that our confessions are out, i realize how blind i was before.. i know now.. and i'll never let that go. you are the love of my life

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