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Something You Lost When You were Twelve

It’s the difference between foolish and stupid
and the difference between mean and nasty.

It’s the difference between jazz and jazzy
and the difference between terrible and wild.

It’s the difference between faith and faithless,
and it's something you lost when you were twelve.

It’s paved the road to hell and back,
"So buy back your innocence now !"

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  • Hmmm I found this quiet interesting infact. The incorporation of repetiton used in every stanza is a great technique with the concluding one being the best. Well done!

    ~Emily~ xx


  • Rowan gold member
    July 13
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    Not quite what I'm looking for, but thanks for entering.