It’s the difference between foolish and stupid
and the difference between mean and nasty.
It’s the difference between jazz and jazzy
and the difference between terrible and wild.
It’s the difference between faith and faithless,
and it's something you lost when you were twelve.
It’s paved the road to hell and back,
"So buy back your innocence now !"
A contest entry
- Fine line between by Rowan.
3500 points, ended July 13, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Great stuff...
So much expressed in so few words...
Well penned, well versed, Well Done!!!
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Hmmm I found this quiet interesting infact. The incorporation of repetiton used in every stanza is a great technique with the concluding one being the best. Well done!
~Emily~ xx
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Not quite what I'm looking for, but thanks for entering.
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