Empty room
spinning with decay
something old, something new, something borrowed, something blue
the altar crimson
the coffin polished
the goust now and forever saying I do
to the empty house
to you
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie # 2 .. picture up.. by kiwigirljacks.
475 points, ended July 13, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Dark by The.Tango.Emily.
600 points, ended July 31, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. That was fantastic!
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this has a lovely flow and was great
wonderful job and congrats on the hm
stephanie -
Ohh.. now made me wonder if he had died of natural causes or if she'd killed him!
Great take.. capturing the essence of a wedding gone wrong!
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