i shiver and tremble
but not from the air
but because you ignore me
and act like you don't care
my tears fall rapidly
staining my cheeks
creating an ever-growing puddle
of water at my feet
i cry out to you, my love
begging you not to go
don't leave me here
for i don't want to be left alone
please, please don't leave
just because we had a fight
don't leave me in the darkness
for your love is my light
i need you here with me
together we can make it through
we'll figure things out soon enough
as long as it's always me and you
my heart beats for no one else
my skin longs for no other's touch
my mind, body, heart, and soul agree
we've never needed someone so much
so please, i beg of you
please, don't leave
you want emotion?
i'll wear my heart on my sleeve
you want me to share everything
that goes on in my life?
i'll tell you everything that happens
even from on the inside
you want me to join you?
i'll follow you to the end of the earth
i'll show you my true value
just how much i'm worth
i'll make you feel so loved
that you could never want another
you want to feel special?
well look to no other
you are my everything
i love no one else but you
so stay here with me, my love
for my love for you will always be true
Author notes
it's a bit corny if i do say so myself.
i just wanted to get my point across to my love that i need him here, with me, within my life. that i love him and only him, and will continue to do so for the rest of my days.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Carlie, this poem is beautiful, and i really liked it totally you showed you feeling for this person you love the only person you wanna be with, this was so sweet of you, very good thoughts,
this poem a bit long but i could not stop reading, it kept me goinn on till the end
Nicely written !
Great Poem !
Shuberth
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Ok offically we can say the guy below is legally blind. Heart in struggle, I fought this so many times. I wrote quite much on it too. It hurts, its just dying. Heh all the holes I taken in my soul, to sacrifice myself for a girl I truly loved, has lefted me scared forever. Though all the heartbreak I took, I finally found someone true and loving. Just takes some time, to sometimes find where the road must end and a new one be taken, or the road be stopped and worked with till all is given our best. Great write lass, I really enjoyed it.
Sincerely,
Deathwolf Tasagka
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Good write!!!
The point you were trying to comes across with in your write had a nice flow, as well as having some deep lines that I really in your write as well. Good job girl, and I'm glad you're happy with your man. I wish you the best... Lildragon34
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