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Rainbow Ashes

Seen here just one more time
Black and white the way you are
Seen through with my life again
Somehow listened and tuned
Fine for me now not never
And sublimely unrealistic

My mind paint it red blue
Green yellow and pink
For a substance I can see
Creeping through my veins
An exploding rainbow of colour
Finding everything in me

Never understanding myself
Finding words harder everyday
Exploding into oblivion
A lovely display of my insides
Substance keeping me who I am

All the truths for all the lies
And everything else in between
Forgotten and never saw here
Seeping out of my eyes here and now
Tears of a rainbow nature
The colors never the same ever again

Find my ashes never to be black and white
Ever again

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  • EntombedCrystalRose
    July 17, 2008

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    More beautiful madness! This was exactly the type of poem I am looking for, as it expressed ideas and thoughs flowingly, no matter how strange. Thank you for entering, and good luck!