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Optimism

I don’t think anything should be more sought after
Than that comforting cure: the loving lull of laughter.

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From my poem "Cure."

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 9, 2008
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    So true so true

    For laughter heals all souls and bringhtens every day


    • after-silence
      August 9, 2008
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      Thanks! It's a little cliche but I think it worked nicely in the original sonnet I had it in, Cure. I had it separately here for a contest.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    July 17, 2008
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    You really put laughter in a good light; thanks for your entry lol


    • after-silence
      July 17, 2008
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      Thank you for the comment and for hosting this fun contest; I really liked the idea!


  • Lady Michaella
    July 14, 2008

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    lol

    Short and sweet, very nice Great message came through even though it was short, its quality not quantity.. I'm happy. lol


    • after-silence
      July 14, 2008
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      Haha thanks. This contest was specifically for short lines; I used this from another poem I wrote entitled "Cure." This was the lovely rhyming couplet to close the sonnet. Take a look if you're interested, although I wouldn't be surprised if you're not--you already know the ending! haha kidding. Well, thanks for taking the time to find and read this!

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