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Phantom Inspiration


Find me ... want me.
Say you'll never leave me.
Hold me ... feel me.
I yearn for nothing more.

All of my life I've wandered
through a sea of endless masses
only to feel utterly alone.

Touch me ... kiss me.
Lie down here beside me.
Hide me ... keep me.
Be mine for Evermore.

All of my life I've struggled
in the garrish light of Daytime.
Take my heart and hide it from the Dawn.
Then we'll wrap ourselves
into the beauty of the Night.


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  • crvorhees
    October 19

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    I enjoyed this alot.. reminds of the way i used to write. can't seem to conjure the darkness quite as often anymore. absolutely beautiful.


  • Wolfdog silver member
    July 13, 2008

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    Excellent

    A rather nice write, with very good imagery. I like it just the way it is. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • DeGraw
    July 13, 2008
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    Seductive yet melancholy!

    A bittersweet love poem!
    Aching for love in return...
    Great pen!
    Regards,
    DeGraw


  • xoxsugarhixox
    July 13, 2008
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    It really makes me think if everyone thinks like this as well...


  • Til the Day I Die
    July 13, 2008

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    wow

    okay this is something people can relate to and i love it!! it's awsome and it just kinda makes me wounder does everyone think like this?

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