Windows of perception
open to a sea of eternal tranquility
Forever freeing
my tormented soul
Author notes
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXVIII - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 16, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Windows of Perception
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms: First off after I read, felt like windows opened and the Spirit free to soar- take to the skies I'm being shown a dove flying out the window- and Oooooh for some reason I am seeing a slurpee- how refreshing~ and hearing phrase: Bahama Blast-
Wowzers~ but also hearing word: Tequila-
and then seeing the Corona commercial with the man and woman on the sand- and hearing the seagulls; a bucket of Corona's on ice- with lemon~whether metaphor or symbolism-
Hopefully that makes some sense
**These words grab: Windows of perception- Love this description
Excellent take on the prompt~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you
WOW! Thank you so much for this amazing comment. Time for a ferw summer cocktails and relax
I appreciate this beautiful comment of my work so much
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this is guite lovely papa, and refreshing, so nicely done in so few words, good luck and take care
love you,
stephanie
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Thank you
Thank you my dear sweet daughter. Your talent helps inspire me
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Love it! I feel you have captured the picture beautifully in your words. Best of luck in the contest
~Jillybean128 -
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your kinds words
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