Metallic taste in my mouth,
The blood on my lips is real.
His body falls to the ground,
The eyes of the poor boy plead.
Hush little one don’t cry,
Tell your sorrows to the stars,
for as much as they try to entice,
The stars in the sky don’t bite...
...I do
Author notes
Option 3 for vampire contest
A contest entry
- Vampires. Slayers, Werewolfs, Zombies,Options, Pre-writes by mystic-angel.
600 points, ended August 14, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark/Gothic Quickie by SuicidalLover.
500 points, ended July 18, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well....not what I was looking for, but a great dark take to the prompt nonetheless. I think it'd be better with more to the story.
~Kystal Angel
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I like this, good imagery in just a few words. Thanks for your entry, good luck.
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great
cute
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