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Lost…but don’t want to be found…..

Vines feed on sorrow seeping
from vacant eyes,
crows flock, alive to the scent
of their next meal,
another soul
to devour, divine…

Fear had taken her before
now;
pulled her into its control
once more.

A discarded picture frame
expresses her, empty moments,
conceals nothing… in exhitbiting
her heavy- hearted torments.

Crouching,
She begs dark gods
to stay unfound
The way to ‘her’, she wishes
will remain; undiscovered...

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  • SuicidalLover gold member
    July 17

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    Yes, so many children seek shelter in dark corners of their inner mind. So sad, yet very truthful.

    ~Kystal Angel


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 14

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    Interseting write

    I have known people who are into the Gothic life and we each have our own paths we feel we have to take .But the path is our choice onlyshould your choice not bring you to the highth of joy then what is left in life be the person you so want to be but never leave out the joy for it is what feeds the soul to live

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 13

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    this is a wonderful take on the picture and you have sure used some amazing detail to create a vine like life to even your words. well done sis

  • notorious silver member
    July 12

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    "The way to ‘her’, she wishes
    will remain; undiscovered..."
    Now I wanna make a discovery!!
    LMAO, funky edits

  • notorious silver member
    July 12
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    "alive to the scent"
    Nice. And kind of gross, might I add.

    I think 'expresses' could be on the same line as "A discarded picture frame"...otherwise, love that.

    "her empty moments hides nothing"
    Bleak! Bleak! =D

    "She begs dark gods
    to stay unfound"
    There's something so quintessentially cool about this.

    =D
    Good luck


    • CinfullyDelicious
      July 12
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      "her empty moments hides nothing"
      Bleak! Bleak! =D


      made changes, what do you think ?

      and thank you..i like the begs dark gods to stay unfound too


      Cind

  • notorious silver member
    July 12
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    Meow
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