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The perfect picture

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Darkness around her, conforting her
The picture of her dark feelings, her dark desires
That no one will see
Forever damned in this lifeless hell of misfortune and despair
No one will know who she really was
They will only know how she died and how she was cruel to everyone
The perfect picture of loneliness.

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Picture: trapped inside my fears-by Obscure-Nymph

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  • SuicidalLover
    July 18, 2008

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    A very interesting take. Wish there was more to it though. *shrugs* Well this seems thoughtful and thats great. You're on your way to great poems.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • darkheart76
    July 12, 2008
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    great

    loved it