Let slender fingers glide between the stars,
and sprinkle your bright mystic lights around.
Your dear creation glides from open minds,
and tells us what is waiting to be found.
Magic twinkles as the universe spins,
hold it to you, little lights on a string.
Flowering amethyst release your light,
and like surrounding stars bring out your wings.
Starry-eyed glowing from gentle mystic hands,
better the cold gray with warm golden suns.
Let the hearts come out from deep within you,
and watch with bright eyes as away it runs.
Author notes
This poem is basically about finding yourself and let the truth within you shine.
A contest entry
- Individual-ized Picture Prompts =] by notorious.
765 points, ended July 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for the advise. I'm still tinkering with it so bare with me.
cassie -
You should put the picture's link on your AN.
"sprinkle your mystic lights all around."
I don't think you need an 'all' here. It feels like an unnecessary word. Otherwise, groovy stars!
"Creation gliding out from open minds"
I love this line...BUT, I don't think you need an 'out' here.
"and tell us what is waiting to be found."
Intriguing...truly.
"Magic twinkle"
I think that should be 'twinkles' to be grammatically correct.
Thanks so much for entering. (: -
Awesome pic! Good luck!
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Interesting and challenging.
http://sallymanda.deviantart.com/art/Finding-Stars-91479970
I love the colors in that pic...if you could bring it to life
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