summer morning
refilling the bird bath
before the heat
A contest entry
- Haiku Workshop by azure85.
600 points, ended July 24, 2008, 60 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely clear images. I found it so refreshing and going over it a second time, liked it even more.
Best of luck in the contest.
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beautiful
a beautifully imaged moment done with grace and love. I like the human being and the birds being in harmony with each other.
excellent work,
myron.
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Ah! I like this! A great, clean haiku. I can visualize this perfectly. Makes me think of the bird bath at my grandparent's farm
Wonderful 'ku & g'luck!
~Pt
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Nice to read you - I enjoy your clear images and style
Alan
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summer morning
refilling the bird bath
before the heat
This is a very nice haiku, a good snapshot of nature in the backyard. Thank you so much!
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Lovely summer images...Good haiku..
All the best in the contest!
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Good haiku
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Thank you! One of my summer chores.
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