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The Devil

He hides in dark places
I've seen him in a father's eyes;
ice blue...cold

Sensed his evil hiding
behind closed doors nailed shut
Sensed him watching

Slithering through trees
hoping you'll walk by so he
can nab you

Grab you / hold you
keep you from ever
finding The Light.

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  • ErrantHeart
    August 12, 2008

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    Yes, well, the devil can slither, nab, grab you...but the dirty scheming shit sock cannot keep you from The Light...unless you allow it.

    I've seen him in a Father's eyes too, thankfully not a permanent resident. But I have seen.

    Excellent.






  • humblpye gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    Old Nick!

    Yes, he's everywhere, we put him there... he goes by many names doesn't he...well, i did enjoy this poem very much one thing tho, I always thought you gotta have darkness to be able to appreciate light; balance is what it's all about...


  • leo2
    July 15, 2008

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    Believe me, I've been chased by those same demons of the past more than once myself. I hope you're doing well my friend.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

  • Just4u
    July 15, 2008

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    Forgiveness is often a hard thing to do, but often long after thee offender has left, by the replaying of the event in our mind, their actions are kept alive, so
    then it is no longer them who are hurting us, but rather our own hatred of them that continues the curse.
    Others can imprison us, but after escaping the event that put us there, it is only us, who can keep those
    bars up around us. Final freedom only comes through the ultimate release and that can only come through forgiving those who have wronged us, so we are no longer chained by those past events.


    To wish bad upon another
    withholds the light from you
    To harbor in the darkness
    covers all that is true
    To lurk among the shadows
    keeps the rays from touching skin
    To fill a heart with anger
    makes sure you'll never win

    To touch upon the dark side
    is a thing we all will do
    For dual we are by nature
    but the choice is left to you
    So make the trip a brief one
    so you see there's no real gain
    Then even in a letdown
    you won't think from Devil's brain...



    Hope your week is going better then mine...
    Hugs...Eddy