When I went to England
It was soo much fun!
We saw so many things and all!
Big Ben, Buckingham palace and more!
But all I could was home,
all my pets and friends
Away for two weeks without seeing them!
After the first 5 days I got
So Home Sick I wanted home!
But Somehow I managed to make through
and I had a great time!
A contest entry
- Traveling Abroad by liduen.
690 points, ended July 26, 2008, 7 entries
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Blimey, only two weeks?
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Sounds like fun!
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Aw, I loved your poem! I'm so glad you had a great time!
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Wonderful poem! I'm so glad you got to go! Two weeks IS a long time, but for a trip that long you need every minute of it. I had the same homesick feeling when I went to Germany for two weeks....but I wouldn't change the fun I had for anything! Great poem!
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Great job! I think you have a typo in the fifth line - you left out a word or two. I'm glad you had a great time in England. Great job and good luck in my contest
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