Tainted creeks flows
amongst pristine tranquilly.
Powdered snow melts away;
unearthing crimson chaos:
Lies, sorrow and regrets bloom
into thorny roses, watered with
blood lined creek.
Serenity is stained, even within
this monochrome forest
A contest entry
- Dark Quickie [PIF] by AngelKat42.
800 points, ended July 12, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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yeah if u wouldnt had won the gold for this one, i would have to protest lol. great work
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This is beautiful! You are a wonderful poet and can write so many different feelings well!
Peace and Love
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this is fantastic. I love your take on the prompt. the imagery throughout this poem is vivid. beautifully dark.
good luck
kat
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Love this! Your word choice is fab and really gives a dark undertone.. how the serenity has been slashed with blood!
Great take!
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