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You Know I Need You

Fine tune me, Lord.
Set all of my controls.
I need your input,
my impulses are real bold.

Turn my dials, oh God.
Flip me on and off.
Fine tune me please Lord,
upon You I place this demand.

I'm needing You to do
what only You can.
Refresh me; oil lube me, too.
I've got issues...

But, I'll be good
when You are through.
Often times I'm out of whack,
I'm no good, when alone on the rack.

If You adjust me
and get me in tune,
I'll be ready for Your return;
I know You're coming soon.

Intensity of desire
is what I now have.
Set my desire on fire
with Your soothing salve.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    Very creative and well written in depth and prayer...I have felt this way often in life and he always comes through...everyone needs adjusted once in ahwile, to keep us on the right track...
    Nicely done!
    mystic


  • Age of Rain
    July 30, 2008

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    Okay. This was really weird. In a good way. I don't think I've ever heard 'God' and 'Lube' in one poem together outside of Erotica. *laughs* This was well writ! Best of luck!


  • individuality gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    a good piece that speaks in prayer to the lord - ah we all get out of whack at times in our crazy lives, that is normal.


    • 2lullabyhaven
      July 15, 2008
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      Yes, the proverbial-out of whack hahaha some of us more than others, I know that I am a riotlol