I still belive in art.
Somehow it can exist.
I know we can show You
how we still love You.
Though we don't know art
except how it exists,
through how it exists,
I'll trust You
know truly the purpose of art:
art exists for You.
A contest entry
- Tritina by warrior-eagle.
700 points, ended August 25, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for fixing it, & well done.
..Simply Me♥ -
I didn't read the poem yet,
just looked for the form of the tritina and didn't find it.
Here:
A ten line poem we’ll write, just you and I
But let’s call it Tritina, shall we, love?
Connecting lines together...fun with you!
Could we take turns so I could share with you?
Although it might be hard, for sometimes I
Begin with words you might not like or love.
But we could try, okay, for I would love
Co-ordinating all the lines with you
At last, our own creation, you and I.
It ends, Tritina says, with I love you.get it? Try looking at the poems other people entered in the contest. I am not going to DQ you, just try again. If you need help get at me.
...Simply Me♥
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aww wow! this is great! nice nice work!
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Interesting
Your writing style intrigues me, I enjoyed the form this poem took in it's direct address to the reader, as well as the idea that art exists because of us FOR us.
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