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When He Touches-One Sees

Unknown
is familiar to me.
The taste of it,
fits in my infinity.

Rarity
became my song
alone to face the world.
And face it; one must.

Surrender
this is my seasoned state;
for now, I understand
that all is in his hands.

Acceptance
is the newest edition.
To accept is to see,
to behold is to be.

Thanks
always follows enlightenment,
or so it should.
So, thanks be to God,
who touches one's soul.

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  • individuality gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    alone to face the world - that is the way of it and always will be i think, even though we may surround ourselves with friends, we are always alone.


    • 2lullabyhaven
      July 15, 2008
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      Yes, alone inside of a crowd of people, trekking through our own thoughts, sorting out all own impressions lol so true, Ian lol


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    Humbled sentiments are weaved in the verse and inspiring the readers as well...Thank you so much for entering my contest..