I’ve spent my life
on auto pilot.
Strange frequencies
jamming the static,
muting the volume.
Slipping,
through the cracks
comprising the system,
loading, loading, loading,
not responding!
The result is always incomplete.
Between
the RAM and the ramifications
there is little resolution.
How many fatal errors
does it take to equal a fatality?
There is no Escape
only a numbing sense of futility.
Overwrite or Overdrive?
Evolution of Desolation?
You decide.
Author notes
Not written for any prompt.
A contest entry
- Have you ever... by Age of Rain.
1300 points, ended July 31, 2008, 57 entries
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Comments
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An unusual poem. Reading it aloud is actually rather fun. Interesting use of capitalization as well. A measured calculation on your part. Well done.
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Very well written and I admire the truth within this write--
Well Done & Good Luck in the contest!
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flawless free verse flow
I love a well written free verse though I have not been satisfied with any of my attempts
great work
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Thank you for your kind comments.
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