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The Color of Drowning




dark purple swimming pools
drink of the holes in our minds
breaking down the walls
between bedroom
and horizon.
one
by
one
primary colors
sift through the filter
and I wonder where we'll be
should we decide to finish
this leftover wine...






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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    July 29, 2008

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    I love the way you ended this...or should I say, the way you left it un-ended. Thank you for entering

  • ocerus
    July 12, 2008
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    Nice! You should sell this to American Pie. They could use another plot! - ocerus