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Him & Whispering Wind.


Him & Whispering Wind

Listen to the whispering wind
it may have a message for you
send your thoughts soaring along
they may find solace for you.

It is not entirely dark
some light still left over there
seek what you might be seeking
it may be there for you.

Stop worrying for him
he is the master of his own destiny
heed the warning of the wind
it will be good for you.

He left you on your own
and turned back on his word
may be in his denial
lay the truth for you.

You can see the look on his face
bewildered, confused and desperate
if you know the real state of his mind
that may be enough for you.

Wish him the best and
pray for him through your soul
may be in his salvation
that door will open for you.

By:-
Rahbar.

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  • Tqop
    May 13

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    Very Good:

    Very beautiful poem. And might I say, I love the flowers in the background, but back to the poem; it was brilliant. It was very up-building, and it had a great moral to it. Great job. Thanks for sharing.

    • Roy-rahbar
      May 14
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      Thank you

      Hello Evemauy...it was really nice of you to comment on this poem...this peice is close to my heart.
      Rahbar.


  • AnanCat
    July 12, 2008

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    thank you for sending me a message to read this wonderful poem..I loved it so I'll bookmark it..good job,my friend!!!

    • Roy-rahbar
      July 15, 2008
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      You are most welcome !

      Hello Anan..I am glad you liked my poem 'Him & whispering wind'...I hope you don't miss any of my poem...Farewell !
      Roy-rahbar.