Shrine of Rememberance
the eternal flame
warms my nose
A contest entry
- Haiku Workshop by azure85.
600 points, ended July 24, 2008, 60 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Shrine of Rememberance
the eternal flame
warms my nose
Oh, this is an interesting haiku. L1 could stand for anything, which is a good way to write haiku. (no, I didn't look at the link, I like a good mystery of thought) Thank you so much!
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Nice one - had to look up Shrine of Remembrance and see its flame, but then I understood. You feel its heat - communication.
Marlene -
Excellent ah-ha! Now this one, I really liked. No question about it. Best of luck in the contest. Great haiku.
Joan
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I like this, although, I am conflicted as to what it is describing lol, but I think that is just me and my cloudy mind at the moment. But, it sounds like the memory of a past love .... correct me if I'm wrong
G'luck in the contest!
~Pt
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I had to look it up too in order to understand
http://www.flickr.com/photos/james-oppenheim/384571470/in/photostream/
Once you see it - you'll go ahhhhh
Marlene -
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ah! yes lol. I understand now I thought it being a memory was too abstract for a 'ku lol.
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