Do you feel that
eating away at your conscience
it's called remorse.
It makes you feel like that
it makes your soul hurt.
It forces you to rethink.
Rethink what you did
who you've become
and whether it was worth it.
Remorse; sorrow and pain.
Yeah you'll get what's comming
and you know what'll hurt the most.
That you know you deserve it.
Author notes
For prompt 7.
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I wish some people I know would show a little bit more bloody remorse, as I tend to apologize to people for other peoples doing, as I feel that if I don't nobody else will and I hate to see anyone miserable.
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You're not the only one. I never can understand how people can have such hearts of stone. It's ridiculous.
I hate seeing people misserable it hurts; I always have this strong urge to comfort upset people. I've even done it for total strangers before and just sat with them. I'm weird like that.
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