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I Forget


I forget

I forget how it feels to be desired
To be wanted both by day and by night
To be touched and seduced by music
To be kissed in the soft glow of candle light.
Help me to remember…..

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  • Puppydog gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!

    So sad yet very beautiful, I also have forgotten that feeling of being loved and cared about. No candlelit evenings for me for many years now. I love music especially the soft, emotional kind but now even that has left me. Maybe one day ones like us will find that one special person who will bring these lost feelings back to us.


    • neenabean
      September 13, 2008
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      thank you so so much you always have such lovely comments for me

      • Puppydog gold member
        September 13, 2008
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        Hey there!

        You are always sincerely welcome! Your poems are a joy to read. 's


  • lostcorruptedsoul
    July 29, 2008
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    life gives you what you need when you need it ; )


  • abuyi
    July 14, 2008
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    why such loneliness and despair..??
    nicely done.. this words could be shared and related by most


  • Decorus Somnium
    July 12, 2008

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    Oh this is such a deep write. It's short yet it shows a lot. We all forget about these stuff sometimes, trust me.
    PS I KNOW! I haven't written anything lately too
    Keep writing


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 12, 2008

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    Sorrow

    I felt sorrow in this piece. It made me think of someone who is with someone who shows no love or affection and they just can't remember why they are there. Great read. ~mandie~


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 12, 2008
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    This is a feeling that I think so many
    of us can relate to. It's very difficult
    to find the right words to say sometimes
    even though deep down inside, you know
    that they are there. I hope that you find
    your inspiration and muse again very soon!
    Thanks a lot for sharing this here!




    Jeremy0826

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