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Celestial Lady Of The Stars

Oh lovely Celestial Lady
Pouring out Stardust from your vase
Standing on the chin of the Moon
Your beauty is seen within your face

Your loveliness mingled with the stars
As it reflects from the moon's beam
Brings joy and happiness to earth
It reflects in our lakes and streams

Moon-glow soft and mellow this night
Sheds joy and happiness with love
Especially with your vase of stars
Gently falling from above

So lovely Celestial Lady
I bid you fond adieu
I leave you to all the lovers
Who will look kindly upon you

Author notes

Poem written from pic Moon Of The Night II by Manips-Of-Artist2

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    Aww that's a lovely write for the picture! Had such a softness and wistfulness to it! Beautiful thoughts, thank you!


    • Katie Lazette
      July 13, 2008
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      Thank you kiwigirljacks for your comment and for the HM. I enjoyed entering your contest.


  • Sandygram
    July 12, 2008

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    Lovely Poem

    Good Evening, Your words have created such lovely imagery. They describe the picture so well. A delight to read this warm sumer eve. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Best of luck my friend. You take care.

    Blerssings,
    Sandy


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 12, 2008
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    Beautiful

    I love the metaphors. Your use of adjectives was stellar and the flow was as smooth as silk. I think that I have fallen in love with this poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest because you most assuredly deserve it. ~mandie~