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desire

close your eyes to the thrill of one encounter
sense the perfume of flowing hair and fragrant skin
take the gifts of pleading nature's inquisitive surprise
never give more to a gypsy phantom of pure desire

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  • piccola silver member
    August 29, 2008
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    very elegant though short. Congratulations on winning a silver for it and thank you for entering


  • notorious gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    This is very eloquently written.
    "the thrill of one encounter"
    I love this!!

    "pleading nature's inquisitive surprise"
    Mother Nature can surprise one.

    "gypsy phantom"
    Great phrase!! Has awesome imagery.

    Thanks for entering. (: