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A fleeting glance of ecstasy.

 

Beads of your sweat
…linger

then fall
to my heaving chest,

I am lost in the lust,
shining from your eyes,

I sense your needs
your wanton thoughts…
I thrust into you...slowly
and look into your soul

your tongue plays
tricks on my mind

and you smile...your eyes..
Pulling me harder into you..

I feel your hands
grip me,
tight
in excitement..

I send our game
into overtime.
Meeting
your every thrust,
taking your free hand
to other
...desiring places

I close my eyes and sense your mouth
searching for mine,
wanting to drink from my lips...

My hand exploring your skin
smooth and warm
damp from passion

Your thighs close around me,
pulling me deep
controlling my enthusiasm,
guiding our rhythm

as thunder rolls
and lightening crashes outside,
Our bodies glisten and move
in the darkness...muscles ripple,
fingers search...hands caress...

Our mouths meet
and I kiss you passionately
wanting you,

needing to posses you utterly

Feel,
right down to the very depths
of your heart,
take hold as we soar
and never let go…


Author notes

Not sure if collaborations are okay for the contest..but I did promise my Aunty an entry

This is written by myself and my ap lover, unsigned, The gorgeous Simon

I was bored...he helped take the boredom away...and I just adore that we write the same, a lot, when it comes to matters of love and sensuality

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Honey this is delicious!!! I love the way you added in the storm outside. Isn't it so nice to make love while it storms...just adds such a dreamy and sensual feel to everything. This is beautiful Cin....thank you!

    'ssssssssss
    Aunty Az


  • Lady Australis silver member
    July 12, 2008

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    uh.. wow lol

    (i will not think about this is my sister and daddy eww lol)

    i love you both your mazeing


  • Cannonsfire
    July 12, 2008

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    Yup this would take away the boredom for sure!!! Well done you two it was a pleasant way to wake up here. Love, C


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    July 12, 2008

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    i think you too did an excellent job here.... very ummmmmmm sexy...lol.... hehe... thanks for sharing this and goood luck in contest......!

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