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Unmatched Beauty

Her beauty is unmatched
as she watches from
her perch on the moon.
Her heart is full of love
for the joy she knows
this world does hold.
Longing to be apart
of this earth once more
but knowing her time
here has ended.
So she watches
as time unfolds
praying for just one more
chance to hold the ones she love.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 16, 2008
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    Beautiful write here

    Spoken with such gentle care and love this is truly a great write indeed .


  • daviscth silver member
    July 16, 2008
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    This is such a pretty poem and I just love the color!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    The world does hold job doesn't it? Even though it's often clouded by the cruelty that we see..
    This is a lovely take on the pic.. a tinge of sadness for knowing her time has ended, but her love extending..


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 12, 2008

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    Oh, this is lovely, your words are so full of hope and love.! What an amazing direction you've taken the prompt. Thanks so much for sharing this, and all the best in the contest, Luck.


  • solitarytear
    July 12, 2008
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    wow

    realy great write.....thanks for the comment on mine too.....good luck to you as well

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