Inspired by Real Dreams
Arrayed in moonlit shades
your flesh whispers,
softly
……. to me.
Volumes of desire,
palpitating….
I long to caress you.
The hushed silence of your silk dress
as it slides from your shoulders
engenders anticipation. Salivating,
I await the taste of your tendered skin.
Through refrains of haunting revelation,
you step oh so slowly from the silken
barrier laying at your feet. My pulse
quickens in each deliberate movement.
My breath pauses, as your tongue dances,
moistening your lips. I need to cradle them
within the sensitive folds of my own.
Inhaling the magnolia blossoms,
riding upon the breeze, my quaking
hands reach for yours, unsure of their course.
I desire to make love to you, without a sound.
As quietened tones of time pass between us,
promises of fulfillment speak softly in our souls.
Nature’s evening chorus envelops us, as I
eagerly succumb to your embrace.
Our bodies mould into one another, we find
ourselves at the intersection of bliss and sensuality.
There, my mouth begins its’ purposeful journey,
my dreams become reality, and I revel in each kiss.
Boldly you direct my path, as you too hunger
for the culmination of its’ wayward descent.
Within the awaited folds of your petals,
I seek to perform a symphony, wet interludes
composing your bodies’ orchestration.
Joyfully, satisfaction finds its’ way forward.
in each ecstatic utterance cascading
forth from you. Your brazen breath fades
under each of my ministrations.
Languishing under your spell, I yearn
to release my own captured energies.
With a knowledge of certain craving,
I knock at the juncture of your womanhood.
Appealing for entry, into the long awaited
mystery of your essence, I momentarily hesitate.
In a natural ebb and flow, we become lost
in our rhythmic excursion. Penetrating my
muscled back, your nails trace a course
of their own. Unashamed, your hands
pull me closer, deeper into the recesses
of your closeted wonders.
Unable to fight any longer, I diligently
search for that elusive plateau. Wishful
that your arrival coincides with mine.
Basking in the throes, our souls find
sanctuary in the completion.
Beginning the long trek back from
our enriching heights, once more
I cleave unto you. Gently I lay my head
upon your chest, while delicately I frame
my words, warming your breast with each.
Finding my way to your graceful side, I
cradle you to my own broad shouldered
pecs. Holding you there, my adoration
of you speaks to every fiber of my being.
Our sweat drenched bodies, find relief
with the cooling of the nighttime air. This
inspiring encounter, almost sublime in
its’ reality, brings with it a provision of peace.
For through our union, our spirits continue their
Eternal Song.
Author notes
Alright not my normal genre, but I had to give it a go.
Not that the thoughts haven't plagued my mind for some time.
A contest entry
- LOVERS by Whispering Wind.
750 points, ended July 15, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such a beautiful way of composing such a gesture.
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Beautiful Soft Words
You have penned a very sensual and beautiful poem of love between two who adore each other. It so deserved the Gold. Congratulations!!! This was a delight to read and made me long to be with the one in my heart far away. Thank you for sharing this tender poem. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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I like this nice and soft! very visual!!
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I like this poem. It's truly sensuous and not obscene. It makes the reader work to see the picture, instead of throwing something vulgar out. Excellent write.
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This appear to have been a path
We all have traveled many times, besides in our minds....mac
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I enjoyed this. Very descriptive. I see the man more so now coming out. Very sensual piece.
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POOR...DESERVES 5 STARS
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You did a good job.
It is something i can't do.....
maybe cause i have been married for so long....hhaaaa
But I think you moved around the subject tastefully...
The male hunger was there...
The Lion...
ready to kill the young of past males to start a new.
None of the rude references to the female body that the shallow male aspires to....lol
I think you pulled it off eloquently my good man!
You got balls.....lol
but it seems to have its pay day...
Good job!
Im really not just saying that..it takes a certain swagger to pull this off...my hats off to you.
LOWELL -
WOW
I think I'll go take a cool shower and have a cigarette. You did this very tastefully which makes it that much more sensual. Lovely and tender...what else can I say? I adored it
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Superb
A most excellent write with exquisite imagery. I like it just as it is. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
WOOOOOOWO...oh my goodness....this is superb, fantastic, celestial...I just love your words....an beautiful step away and you've done this so well.
"Unable to fight any longer, I diligently
search for that elusive plateau. Wishful
that your arrival coincides with mine.
Basking in the throes, our souls find
sanctuary in the completion."
^^^incredible!!! I love this so much....
Thanks for sharing this,
Luck.
PS: im a bit trashed to gve a good comment...but oh my shattered nerves this is awe inspiring, i just love you writing, lovey...Lucki
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I have only 7 words to say~ CAN I HAVE MY BREATH BACK NOW~
damn! Silent Hawk! thank you for the enter:f
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Wow...
Jesus. That was the first word that came to mind when I read this.
You've outdone yourself, dear one. I've always told you that you are talented and the truth is that you are
This is brilliant. I see the tender words and read into the imagery that only an amazing poet can create. The meeting of two souls in such a passion that it ignites the stars..
This is so amazing.. as are you.
Brilliant. That is the last of what I have to say
Your sister
Shari
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