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So close

We are so far away

...

Yet so close





xoxox

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I love you babe xxx

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  • Lonely Christina
    July 19, 2008
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    whohoo i love this! small words say big things
    xoxo- christina


  • CharcoalScreams
    July 13, 2008
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    Thank you for your kind words x

  • lyrebird
    July 13, 2008
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    This poem says so much with so few words.

    It's great.

    ♥


  • CharcoalScreams
    July 12, 2008
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    Glad it put a smile on your face hunnie xx


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    July 12, 2008
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    I love you too baby girl xxx


  • Fixsius
    July 12, 2008
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    Well it's not poetry but its poetic.


  • CharcoalScreams
    July 12, 2008
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    Thank you. Its just something that popped up in my mind..


  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 12, 2008
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    wow, these few words spoke so much... simple, short, and sweet! awesome, keep penning kays!

  • hardeepb
    July 12, 2008
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    Wow 8 words says a lot...I feel the same way...nice write...heartfelt

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