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Some Friend

What am I suppose to do?
Wait around for someone who
said they really care?
No--I don't think so,
not this time,
I won't do it again.
A friend shouldn't make another friend
wait for them to come back,
when they think it's convient for them.
How lame is that?
I have other things to do,
things I want to get done.
You think that I don't have to get things in order also?
I still made time for you and for whoever else that wanted
to hang out.
It's not cool.
You're acting selfish, and idiotic.
Was it too much for you,
With me wanting to hang out for a little bit when you hadn't asked?
Am I'm that terrible to be around with?
Nobody else thinks so, so why do you?
Stop acting like an immature brat,
you need to grow up and see what you're doing
is wrong and moronic.
I'm not gonna wait around for you,
and I really hope you don't think that.
Until you get your head outta your ass,
don't come around and bother me.

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Lame ass people.

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  • Excellent

    Ah, you've quite well describe situations I've found myself in, in years past. Very well written indeed. I always like it when I can personally relate to the subject matter of someone's poem Thanks for sharing.
  • Anger and frustration bleeds all over this piece. Could use some revising. There is much potential for a real solid piece.

  • myron silver member
    July 19

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    this is an overt expression of disgust at bad friendship. something is obviously not going to plan - that's the problem when we have expectations - as they are hardly ever met and can only cause disappointment.

    best wishes,
    myron.