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~Mirror Mirror On The Wall~

 

Sad hours

by the mirror,

regreting the wrinkles,

hating the grey,

sighing for their youth

of yesterday.

Lying about their age,

buying lotions,

trying potions,

forgetting

in this book of life,

they never can turn back

a single page.

So what becomes of vanity

when youth has gone away?

Are photographs

the last remains

of the glory of yesterday?

'And what becomes of ego
when self respect is dead?
perhaps it dies
when starved of lies
on which in it’s hunger fed.'

 

 

© 2008 Angel's Whispers (All rights reserved)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hello Dear Friends,
I would like to thank you in advance for reading my words, and also for any comments that you leave.
I appreciate your thoughts dearly and value your time to read and review my work.
I send to you many beautiful blessings of love and happiness.
Take care dear friends.


Your friendly angel in poetry,
~Angel-Anne~

 

 

 

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  • nature mithya
    July 15

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    Gold

    The Mirror Talk’s



    Your have beauty perform motion.
    Walk of the confident, lovely grace.
    Strike life’s aged cycle with caution;
    So you, interact, with the mirror face.

    I am charmed yes truly halve-d
    With thy: tender, touching, lotions.
    Loaded words, commotions calmed.
    Dazzling flowers strikes promotion.

    I have no measures for such treasures;
    There is GOLD: a true hearts pleasure.



    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 16
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      nature

      Thank you so much for your kind and warm comment,along with your applause.
      Your thoughts on my work is appreciated dearly,as I am here to learn,and to try and better my writes.
      I am pleased that you liked my entry.
      I always try to write from my heart.

      Take care and blessings of love and happiness I send to you.

      your friendly Allpoetry angel,
      ~Angel-anne~
  • nature mithya
    July 13
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    'In its hunger'

    Love to but can't. Would not be fair.

  • ckwriter69 silver member
    July 12

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    Extremely beautiful and what you have to say speaks volumes about life and growing old. Wonderful background that represents your words so well. Thanks for sharing your vision and good luck in the contest.


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 16
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      ckwriter69


      Hi charley hugs to you.Thanks so much for your loyal reading of my work,you truely are a gem of a friend.I am happy that you enjoyed the read and liked my layout of the poem.I try to bring the page alive with my graphics in most of my writes, but without taking the importance of the poem away.
      Take care dear sweet friend and many beautiful blessings to you and your wonderful family and a BIG hug to those adorable grand babies of yours!
      ~Angel~
  • dustookie2 silver member
    July 12

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    This would look brilliant in a book of poetry.....the presentation layout and artwork completely supports and compliments the other. Beautifully crafted lines flow with ease from the page settling in my thoughts. What an excellent take on the prompt. Yet I see such an inspirational message when our sensors are constantly being exposed to all the media on how being beautiful is the way ahead in life ... how so many fall into this trap and undergo expensive surgery or follow the latest trend..thank god for individuality. Good luck.


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 16
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      dustookie2


      Hi there mook,it's wonderful hearing from you.Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and applause.You hit the nail right on the head with your comment as you understood the message within my write.I am so pleased that you enjoyed the poem,I always try to write from my heart.And YES!!! Thank God for individuality
      Blessings to you sweet soul,may you always have an angel by your side to love and protect you.
      your friendly allpoetry angel,
      ~Angel-anne~

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    July 12

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    What a gorgeous piece you have put
    together for this contest my friend.
    I love the presentation and contents
    of this. Well done and I hope that
    you do well with it in this contest.
    Good luck to you and thanks a lot
    for sharing it with us all here!




    Jeremy0826


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 16
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      Jeremy0826


      Hello Jeremy, how nice to hear from you.I hope this message greets you with a happy heart!
      I am so pleased that you have enjoyed the poem,and its presentation.I always try to bring my pages alive with my writes but without taking the importance of the poem away.Thank you so much for the read, comment,and applause.Your thoughts on my work are always appreciated.
      Take care dear friend and many beautiful blessings to you and your loved ones.
      Your friendly allpoety angel,
      ~Angel-anne~
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