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Marks of Love

Beaten, paining, sadly marked,
your love extreme, brutal.
Do I love you or it?
Do you give love or shit?
All the beauty in the world
ruined by lovers' cravings.

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Picture prompt from the artist:
http://ichanco.deviantart.com/art/Will-U-still-love-me-tomorrow-86981227


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  • toomysterious
    September 12, 2008
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    Very dark and sad comment on some kinds of love.


  • Ravensdark
    July 13, 2008

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    Dark springs to mind. I found it to be a poem that inspires thought. Got an eiree feeling of unspoken truth lying beneath the sugar coated topping of society. Great poem.

  • AngelKat42
    July 12, 2008
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    interesting take on the prompt.. I like it.. great job

    good luck

    kat