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luminous

You're taciturn,
  unmovable,
waxen in your style.
your look is dead,
colourless
    but eyes
are full of life.

It is that life
  for which I yearn.

Unveiled,
  the iris
of your eye
must be
beautiful.

Show me your distinct beauty
that kindness,
  (I can only wish for)
that grace,
  (I can only hope for)
that love,
  (I only want to glimpse it)
So benign, golden love
    Show it to me.

I will never cross this darkness
this coldness you have placed between us.

We will never get to know eachother.
We will never be close.

Author notes

I picked the ABC wordbank, and used the words: waxen, colourless, yearn, iris, distinct, kindness, benign, golden.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 13, 2008
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    I like the kind of oxymoronish feel in the start there... interesting