I am getting distorted,
in one fiery instant,
and becoming Eclectic-
a body of flesh and Light,
I am creating the spirits,
soul creation-
I am becoming a stone,
in a numberless,
of transformations-
I am hearing the universe,
in unsion with a symphonic melody,
bursting and overflowing,
with a spiritual speech-
yet in all that I am,
becoming, creating and hearing,
I am too blinded by reason,
to sip from the cup of immortality-
the blood of a saint,
O God, please open my eyes,
O God...
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Salvation...
true words no matter how it is presented so many people are blinded by reason. God Bless You - this is awesome.
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this is a very deep poem
its amazing, it seems to have a lot of personality in it. I love how it includes a mysterious touch to it.
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A deep write, showing humility
Your spiritual wealth is vast, dear poetess
I really enjoyed this write
Good luck :f
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Powerful Are Your Thoughts
As you weave spiritually to reach universally in poetry!
I always enjoy pondering upon the light songs you sing.
Thanks for sharing dear friend, and know you are loved.
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~ 
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All in a consciousness...
Whose consciousness? Whose reason?
Wonderfully descriptive and with great inferences.
This is a great write Judy!
Sol
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nicely painted the dillemma here in so much deep words my friend..I love this piece..thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..well done...
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lovely plea to God
and as always a lovely soulful write,
love the way you brought this together
a very peaceful flow.this is simply gorgeous
God bless...
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This was.... wow.
I'm never good with words and when I am, they're very simple. It's a fact.
You seem to have no problem though.
There's such a profound meaning.
Good luck in the contest
Sincerely,
dovey ~
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wow. love this. the last seven lines are incredibly powerful.
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