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shame




The needle
was washed away
in the rain
like everything else that comes
with addiction.


The tracks
on my arms
are fading away.

[the pain of what I've done... won't]

Honesty please.

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  • whiterabbit--x
    July 18

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    Once again, I love this. I can really feel and relate to the emotions here. This is so sad but beautifully written. Another brilliant write doll.
    ♥

  • candyinchelsea gold member
    July 16

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    baby girl,
    this is short and prophetic... please know
    that pain no matter how deep eventually goes away.
    its the knowlegde that you will not go back to that
    space that will hopefully resonate with you.
    i love you kiddo
    mom


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 16

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    Needle points and the eyes that reflect the painful past
    A great short write and raw too
    Best wishes
    Julie


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    July 12

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    i love you.

    your amazing.
    and this poem is sad.