The boy
Lives in a castle made of
the bones of the
girls who have loved
and lost
and he sits on his throne
and he ponders in his tomb
titled "Young man's Heart"
he wishes and wishes
that he could tear it apart
but it stays intact
and gives him
heart attack
All the time he feels the loss
but never knows
the price
the cost
The girl
Sits in her tree
keeping away
from the sting of a bee
the bite of a wasp
the burn of the sun
the many mnay things
she should've done
she stays up high
and safe as can be
I hurt for this girl
and she hurts for me
Two tales may seem to
not coincide
but they do
no grooms
no bride
explain to me
how to run and hide
no one would know better than you,
oh never mind
what's the
difference.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love how both tales are so difference but so strangly the same.Both the boy and girl are terribly sad.
"The boy
Lives in a castle made of
the bones of the
girls who have loved
and lost"
What a terrific line...great language and imagry...the use a castle made of past lovers bones to describe the loneness of the boy.
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Thank you
for the comment
this thankyou is probably really late
I still mean it nonetheless
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