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Darkness is a Mystery...

Let the darkness become your friend
and let all your emotions sink into its ever lasting solitude
Mysterious yet gentle
The mantle of darkness truly is
It brings forth a world full of many untold story...

Without darkness there is no light
Without darkness there is no place to hide
In an enclosed space it is present
Even in our own little tiny hearts
Let it unfold
let it grow
and cover you into its never ending flow...
If it catches you, what will happen?
You don't know!
But the true is that darkness is a world worth visiting...

Author notes

all credit for the picture goes to http://zardo.deviantart.com/art/Earth-blood-91269754...
I ussually like to write dark sides of things...however this just came out of nowhere hope u like it..

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 22, 2008
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    Congratulations on the bronze with this great poem, it was a pleasure to read

    Sue


  • Spiritual Soul
    July 17, 2008

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    Awesome! I lived this, the ending line "darkness is a world worth visiting" so true, an awesome write about the beautiful dark. Thanks for your entry!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


    • DarkTears
      July 19, 2008
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      cool

      than for ur comments im really glad u like it...