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........walking in black and white........




            chastity walked
            in black and white,
            human frailty
            unbending

            abstinence broken
            by sinners seeking touch,
            soul dancing in color's beat

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. . . . . prompt; avoidance

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  • Grey Mouser
    July 14, 2008

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    I get a feeling of saddness through this, as if a virtue was taken unwillingly from a pure soul by ones swimming in blackness, leaving the heart beating on in the hue of life's blood.
    Very thoughtful and laden with imagery and feeling. Well done, many thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    This is very deep, sad and thought provoking. All the best with this! Excellent piece
    Gaylene