The devil spit
mockingly
This time......
innocent
mankind
you can't blame
me
I've been on vacation
for two centuries!
Author notes
Contest prompt:
pictures talented graphics of photobucket above, and
glittergraphics.below
just to ggiggle your insides,
while your wallet drains away,
or perhaps...your manhood too!
A contest entry
- prompt inspired; 20 words, 10 entries by Grey Mouser.
475 points, ended July 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please don't be shy to comment...it's how we grow poetically!
Comments
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Hehe, had to smile at this. The Devil avoiding the blame for work he would love to claim. Well done and many thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
A darkly humorous write! What a wonderful use of so few words! (Great pics too
)
Well done!
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you know we laugh at this, but reality is just that. The devil has caught us where he knows it hurts us most, the pocketbooks and sadly some have resorted to stealing and other horrendous crimes since this has effected our economy. Excellent use of 20 words and I wish you the best in this contest
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why not laugh about the gas prices...what else can we do except pray? This is funny!!! You have such a way of presenting your message that the readers can relax and enjoy the read and the ride!!!
BRAVO! and I did enjoy
SilverButterfly
Mary
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I think if you're talking of the price of gas we can blame Mohammed.
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Hehehehee. This is great my sister. You realy went with the prompt here. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
xx
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