I hold the frame before your eyes,
In it I see the rich texture of a color so serene,
A world so blue that I cannot help but stare,
There is love here, a love I cannot face,
For you are not for me.
For now I'll paint a portrait,
Of a beautiful face at a beautiful time,
A moment, a single moment,
One that lasts for all time.
True love doesn't wait,
It is preserved.
Please tell me what you think
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Yes, this poem is almost another poems worth over he limit...
This piece is beautiful, going along nicely with the chosen inspiration. Moving, and penned with some great imagery. Nicely penned!
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Awww.. this is such a lovely write for the pic!!
(it's over the 40 word limit tho.. just thought I'd let you know so you can edit before the judge reads
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Beautiful, all I came do is read it again and again sighing.
Ok back to reality snape to it Rose, I wish you luck in the contest with this poem.
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I like it!! It's full of passion and I understand what your saying clearly. I can see what you mean by going over the word limit though. It's still a good piece!
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I don't think she'll count off for that, it is still short and to the point...well, I'm tired, and I'm going to bed...good luck...I'll see the results in the morning.
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(psst.. she does usually count to be fair to other contestants.. don't want you to miss out, so just letting you know again )
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