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Your Everything (To Me)

What do you mean to me?
Such a question to ask.
For I cant stand with you,
And not be moved by your beauty.

You hold my heart,
And take my breath away.
Though I have been torn apart
Here in my soul shall you stay

You are my strength
That keeps me from crumbling
You are the light,
To the shadows of my heart.

You are the hope
That keeps me trusting
You are the life
That shines in my eyes.

You are all I want
In this life of gray
You are all I need
To keep the sad thoughts at bay.

What do you mean to me?
Your everything my darling
And forever you shall be.

after i wrote this i was shunned.

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    July 12, 2008

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    BREATH TAKING

    your sweet words will surly melt your loves heart...it flows like a sweet love song.What do you mean to me? your my everything...sighs...just beautiful my son! thank you so much for sharing with me


  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 12, 2008
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    So uniquely lovely...Love will win,,I do not doubt..do not give up! So expressive a write! Bravo!


  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 12, 2008

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    wow!

    this was beautiful! a lovely piece filled with intense emotions! sent shivers down my spine (in the good way) the beauty in this piece was stunning! i'm blown away... keep writing!


  • eternalsol
    July 12, 2008
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    awww i love this poem its so beauiful