Damn! see her do her warm-up stretches,
Thighs and calves taut under her pants,
That hint of smile, she knows you're watching,
Pushes her goodies all out, and you just ache...
O! to take that glowing face between your hands,
The foreign tastes of her heated, quick-fire tongue,
The sweet hair that tickles between your fingers,
And you reach to unwrap her gi like a present...
But you take too long, damn it, she needs it now!
She shoves you onto the mat, then pounces,
Ripping your cheap Target clothes to shreds,
The whole time kissing you, and you're woozy...
She's down to her sports bra, and you thank Buddha
As she slowly allows you to enter her jade castle,
And the clouds and the rain swirl in your head,
Until she decides to speed things up a little...
And when she's had enough, she leaps off you lightly,
And you're both happy and sad that it's over...
For now.
Author notes
I don't know, hope this is sort of what you wanted. This is choice #1, by the way. It was obviously inspired by the shots of you in your dojo on your site.
To the other contestants, good luck!
Thanks!
- Giovanni
Written January 6th, 2004
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A contest entry
- My first contest!!! Give me Emotions!!! by TrinityMBS.
332 points, ended January 10, 2004, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ohh that was fun....Again great visuals. I haven't been able to find someone that can keep my attention on so many pieces. I must have visuals or I get bored and you are just full of em! Wonderfully done!
Hugs and bites, Lady Raven -
That is funny... ahh, I'm tempted to pen another erotica piece starring you now
... just kidding... maybe.
- Giovanni -
LOL...THANKS! You're the first person to write me a poem! It's so great!! LOL, U know what's REALLY funny? There is a guy named Gio in my jujitsu! LOL... your poem reminds me a LOT of my affair(That's where we met)...and I LIKE that!
Trin
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