I'm sorry to say this but i can't lie to you anymore.
I love you but just not like that, your more liek to family to me than you are a lover.
My heart can only take so much and has only room for one.
I know this hurts you to hear, but I love him more than I love you.
Please don't hate me for this, but I want him.
I know that you'll probley hate me anyways and want to stay away.
But when you find that you can forgive me please let me know.
Author notes
eh, i dunno how good it is, I posted this on my page after seeing this contest but i have yet to get any comments back. I don't know how visual it is but, it explains what has happened to me tonight..
A contest entry
- emotions needed. by etoile.
450 points, ended July 23, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow.
okay work on your spelling please.
i like the emotion
but i don't like how it was expressed.
sorry. -
"your more liek family to me" --> you're more like..
probley --> probably
apart from those spelling mistakes i really like the emotion in this. kindof short and not much imagery, but the contest is looking for emotion so this is great.
thanks and goodluck
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