I walked along the edge of my life
stepping away from the crunch and rustle of emotions
with each step...
Author notes
prompt; avoidance
A contest entry
- prompt inspired; 20 words, 10 entries by Grey Mouser.
475 points, ended July 14, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Taking the turn to pace the outskirts of reality and dodging the importance of the confrontation. Know much about this. Well done and thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
Thought provoking and great write.
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Think we would all like to be able to do this at some point.Brilliant take on the prompt...20 words to inspire beautifully penned. Good luck Am bookmarking...thank you.
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another beautiful and amazing write, if only it was that easy to walk away from the hard things in life. well done hun
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another wonderful written write..... thanks for sharing this and good luck in this ocntest as well...... hugs.....
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